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Subsection on active voice needs reorg #476

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daobrien opened this issue Mar 13, 2023 · 0 comments
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Subsection on active voice needs reorg #476

daobrien opened this issue Mar 13, 2023 · 0 comments
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enhancement Will improve the guide but is not a bug or blocker.

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https://stylepedia.net/style/6.0/#active-voice

I suspect the entire subsection could do with a review, but this bit in
particular needs a rework:

For example, the sentence, "The Developer Center, a site for reference material and other resources, has been introduced to the OpenShift website." reads better than
"The OpenShift website introduces the Developer Center, a site for reference material and other resources." Here, the passive voice is better because the important issue ("The Developer Center") is the subject of the sentence.

@daobrien daobrien added the enhancement Will improve the guide but is not a bug or blocker. label Mar 13, 2023
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