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I suspect the entire subsection could do with a review, but this bit in
particular needs a rework:
For example, the sentence, "The Developer Center, a site for reference material and other resources, has been introduced to the OpenShift website." reads better than
"The OpenShift website introduces the Developer Center, a site for reference material and other resources." Here, the passive voice is better because the important issue ("The Developer Center") is the subject of the sentence.
The text was updated successfully, but these errors were encountered:
https://stylepedia.net/style/6.0/#active-voice
I suspect the entire subsection could do with a review, but this bit in
particular needs a rework:
For example, the sentence, "The Developer Center, a site for reference material and other resources, has been introduced to the OpenShift website." reads better than
"The OpenShift website introduces the Developer Center, a site for reference material and other resources." Here, the passive voice is better because the important issue ("The Developer Center") is the subject of the sentence.
The text was updated successfully, but these errors were encountered: