From b6c6be73c21c5f3a8349b5c0445e55cd1de9c038 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ashleigh Carr <ashcorr20@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 12 Dec 2024 12:12:01 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Update Marketing analysis copy

---
 .../mma/dataPrivacy/YourDataSection.tsx          | 16 ++++------------
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

diff --git a/client/components/mma/dataPrivacy/YourDataSection.tsx b/client/components/mma/dataPrivacy/YourDataSection.tsx
index b122d0bfd..deb7dec32 100644
--- a/client/components/mma/dataPrivacy/YourDataSection.tsx
+++ b/client/components/mma/dataPrivacy/YourDataSection.tsx
@@ -50,20 +50,12 @@ export const YourDataSection = (props: YourDataSectionProps) => {
 		<>
 			<h3 css={dataPrivacyHeadingCss}>Your account data</h3>
 			<p css={dataPrivacyParagraphCss}>
-				What we mean by your account data
+				What we mean by your account data is information you provide
+				when you register with us:
 			</p>
 			<ul css={dataPrivacyUnorderedListCss}>
-				<li>
-					Information you provide when you register with us e.g. email
-					address
-				</li>
-				<li>
-					Information about the products or services you buy from us
-				</li>
-				<li>
-					Pages you view on theguardian.com or other Guardian websites
-					when signed in and your region
-				</li>
+				<li>First name and last name</li>
+				<li>Email address</li>
 			</ul>
 
 			<Lines n={1} />

From 902b3a1283cd090217715168065bd4891e096354 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Patricio Vighi <pvighi@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 20 Dec 2024 13:56:06 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 2/2] small copy change

"register with us" -> "create an account"
---
 client/components/mma/dataPrivacy/YourDataSection.tsx | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/client/components/mma/dataPrivacy/YourDataSection.tsx b/client/components/mma/dataPrivacy/YourDataSection.tsx
index deb7dec32..150116ea1 100644
--- a/client/components/mma/dataPrivacy/YourDataSection.tsx
+++ b/client/components/mma/dataPrivacy/YourDataSection.tsx
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ export const YourDataSection = (props: YourDataSectionProps) => {
 			<h3 css={dataPrivacyHeadingCss}>Your account data</h3>
 			<p css={dataPrivacyParagraphCss}>
 				What we mean by your account data is information you provide
-				when you register with us:
+				when you create an account:
 			</p>
 			<ul css={dataPrivacyUnorderedListCss}>
 				<li>First name and last name</li>