From 3e420cd74d1a38b2425055d8dd316e86a1f9c5f5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: DRAGONBLE3API3C3 <83609128+DRAGONBLE3API3C3@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Mon, 17 Jan 2022 17:13:00 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] I had to redo my skit proofread changes.

Astro's revisions only made their way into my build after I merged in to post my revisions. (even though I fetched origin and merged into master before I began proofreading.)
---
 patch/PAK1_UTF8/15605_0000.txt | 3 +--
 patch/PAK1_UTF8/15609_0000.txt | 2 +-
 patch/PAK1_UTF8/15616_0000.txt | 4 ++--
 patch/PAK1_UTF8/15622_0000.txt | 3 +--
 patch/PAK1_UTF8/15623_0000.txt | 3 +--
 patch/PAK1_UTF8/15626_0000.txt | 4 ++--
 6 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15605_0000.txt b/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15605_0000.txt
index c0722d87c..ee21db39b 100644
--- a/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15605_0000.txt
+++ b/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15605_0000.txt
@@ -13,8 +13,7 @@ to evaporate the water, you would have.
 [ENDBLOCK]
 You can do that? That's amazing!
 [ENDBLOCK]
-We should use that
-to grill some fish!
+We should use that to grill some fish!
 [ENDBLOCK]
 I will not use my powers on
 something so menial.<x00>
diff --git a/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15609_0000.txt b/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15609_0000.txt
index 11aea61b7..b82c17e60 100644
--- a/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15609_0000.txt
+++ b/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15609_0000.txt
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ an entity as intimidating as the Draconis.
 [ENDBLOCK]
 Maybe a beastmaster was controlling them...
 [ENDBLOCK]
-It's possible that they were being manipulated.
+It's likely that they were being manipulated.
 [ENDBLOCK]
 I have never heard of anyone who
 was capable of such things. <x00>
diff --git a/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15616_0000.txt b/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15616_0000.txt
index 3fd5ab587..d66c91593 100644
--- a/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15616_0000.txt
+++ b/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15616_0000.txt
@@ -17,6 +17,6 @@ a state similar in appearance to sleep.
 [ENDBLOCK]
 Huh? So you do sleep.
 [ENDBLOCK]
-We do not.
-We simply suspend uneccesary functions.<x00>
+We do not. We simply suspend
+uneccesary functions.<x00>
 [ENDBLOCK]
diff --git a/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15622_0000.txt b/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15622_0000.txt
index e00500d8b..054e9df51 100644
--- a/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15622_0000.txt
+++ b/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15622_0000.txt
@@ -5,8 +5,7 @@
 get_chat_time=><x17><x15><xC5><x24><x02><x89><x80>
 
 [ENDBLOCK]
-The city of Janos is just
-beyond the forest.
+The city of Janos is just beyond the forest.
 [ENDBLOCK]
 Got it.<x00>
 [ENDBLOCK]
diff --git a/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15623_0000.txt b/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15623_0000.txt
index f144e0658..4acc73a3a 100644
--- a/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15623_0000.txt
+++ b/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15623_0000.txt
@@ -5,6 +5,5 @@
 get_chat_time=><x17><x15><xC5><x24><x02><x89><x80>
 
 [ENDBLOCK]
-The city of Janos is just
-beyond the forest.<x00>
+The city of Janos is just beyond the forest.<x00>
 [ENDBLOCK]
diff --git a/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15626_0000.txt b/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15626_0000.txt
index 68f239e5a..88f5a846b 100644
--- a/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15626_0000.txt
+++ b/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15626_0000.txt
@@ -8,8 +8,8 @@ get_chat_time=><x17><x15><xC5><x24><x02><x89><x80>
 I was kinda worried for a bit, but looks
 like we'll reach Seinegald no problem!
 [ENDBLOCK]
-Don't let your guard down.
-You never know what could happen.
+Don't let your guard down. You
+never know what could happen.
 [ENDBLOCK]
 You worry too much, <Dymlos>!
 [ENDBLOCK]