From c8bfe6fc841042ac5b5aabe07b509fefc1a8fd76 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Richard Barnes Date: Wed, 24 Jul 2024 16:45:33 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Make over-width figure narrower --- draft-ietf-sframe-enc.md | 44 ++++++++++++++++++++-------------------- 1 file changed, 22 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-) diff --git a/draft-ietf-sframe-enc.md b/draft-ietf-sframe-enc.md index f11d6a1..4d45c1d 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-sframe-enc.md +++ b/draft-ietf-sframe-enc.md @@ -1376,28 +1376,28 @@ packetization scheme to work interoperably, one would have to be defined, e.g., as proposed in {{?I-D.gouaillard-avtcore-codec-agn-rtp-payload}}. ~~~ aasvg - +---+-+-+-------+-+-------------+-------------------------------+<-+ - |V=2|P|X| CC |M| PT | sequence number | | - +---+-+-+-------+-+-------------+-------------------------------+ | - | timestamp | | - +---------------------------------------------------------------+ | - | synchronization source (SSRC) identifier | | - +===============================================================+ | - | contributing source (CSRC) identifiers | | - | .... | | - +---------------------------------------------------------------+ | - | RTP extension(s) (OPTIONAL) | | -+->+--------------------+------------------------------------------+ | -| | SFrame header | | | -| +--------------------+ | | -| | | | -| | SFrame encrypted and authenticated payload | | -| | | | -+->+---------------------------------------------------------------+<-+ -| | SRTP authentication tag | | -| +---------------------------------------------------------------+ | -| | -+--- SRTP Encrypted Portion SRTP Authenticated Portion ---+ + +---+-+-+-------+-+-----------+------------------------------+<-+ + |V=2|P|X| CC |M| PT | sequence number | | + +---+-+-+-------+-+-----------+------------------------------+ | + | timestamp | | + +------------------------------------------------------------+ | + | synchronization source (SSRC) identifier | | + +============================================================+ | + | contributing source (CSRC) identifiers | | + | .... | | + +------------------------------------------------------------+ | + | RTP extension(s) (OPTIONAL) | | ++->+-------------------+----------------------------------------+ | +| | SFrame header | | | +| +-------------------+ | | +| | | | +| | SFrame encrypted and authenticated payload | | +| | | | ++->+------------------------------------------------------------+<-+ +| | SRTP authentication tag | | +| +------------------------------------------------------------+ | +| | ++--- SRTP Encrypted Portion SRTP Authenticated Portion ---+ ~~~ {: #sframe-packet title="SRTP Packet with SFrame-Protected Payload"} From 1cc130c6c5474a52ea1410c58b33cd276bb9c10c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Richard Barnes Date: Wed, 24 Jul 2024 16:49:29 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 2/2] Simplify MLS references --- draft-ietf-sframe-enc.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/draft-ietf-sframe-enc.md b/draft-ietf-sframe-enc.md index 4d45c1d..5e0397a 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-sframe-enc.md +++ b/draft-ietf-sframe-enc.md @@ -775,7 +775,7 @@ they are removed), then the sender will need to distribute a new sender key. ## MLS The Messaging Layer Security (MLS) protocol provides group authenticated key -exchange {{?MLS-ARCH=I-D.ietf-mls-architecture}} {{!MLS-PROTO=RFC9420}}. In +exchange {{?I-D.ietf-mls-architecture}} {{!RFC9420}}. In principle, it could be used to instantiate the sender key scheme above, but it can also be used more efficiently directly. @@ -1043,7 +1043,7 @@ The registration template is as follows: * Recommended: Whether support for this cipher suite is recommended by the IETF. Valid values are "Y", "N", and "D" as described in {{Section 17.1 of - MLS-PROTO}}. The default value of the "Recommended" column is "N". Setting the + RFC9420}}. The default value of the "Recommended" column is "N". Setting the Recommended item to "Y" or "D", or changing an item whose current value is "Y" or "D", requires Standards Action {{RFC8126}}.