From b819616a4626dbc0eba355fea33f2d8abdfeb053 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "Alexis \"spectria.limina\" Horizon" <spectria.limina@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 14 Dec 2024 01:51:06 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Fixups based on feedback, acknowledgments

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 content/fru/i1.md | 20 +++++++++++++++-----
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/content/fru/i1.md b/content/fru/i1.md
index 4d2b70c..5b80c29 100644
--- a/content/fru/i1.md
+++ b/content/fru/i1.md
@@ -37,10 +37,11 @@ while each fo the {{mob(n="Crystals of Darkness")}} will target the nearest play
 with a narrow cone.
 
 Oddly, there's no castbar for the big circles,
-but the narrow cones are called {{ice(n="Sinbound Blizzard")}}.
+but the narrow cones are called {{ice(t="Sinbound Blizzard")}}.
 You must be careful about aiming the cones, because if they hit a crystal,
-that crystal will receive {{buff(b="vuln-down")}} for the remainder of the phase,
-making it much harder to kill.
+that crystal will receive {{buff(b="vuln-down")}} for the remainder of the phase.
+The {{buff(b="vuln-down")}} lowers the damage done to a {{mob(n="Crystal of Darkness")}},
+but makes a {{mob(n="Crystal of Light")}} invulnerable.
 
 With the second wave of AoEs, the {{mob(n="Crystals of Light")}} will target the nearest players
 with passable tethers.
@@ -68,10 +69,12 @@ Instead of killing the {{mob(n="Crystals of Darkness")}}, they must all be left
 If all four survive while the {{mob(n="Crystals of Light")}} die,
 they will begin channeling {{dark()}} energy into Gaia and the {{mob(n="Ice Veil")}}.
 Note that using caster LB3 will instantly defeat the {{mob(n="Crystals of Darkness")}},
-so it can't be used if you want to clear the intermission correctly.
+so it can't be used if you want to clear the fight.
+That said, LB3 is still a great prog tool, because the {{mob(n="Ice Veil")}}
+absolutely melts[^1] if all the crystals are dead.
 
 The {{mob(n="Ice Veil")}} will lose its {{buff(b="invincibility")}}
-and gain a {{buff(b="vuln-down")}} in its place, reducing incoming damage by 50%.
+and gain a {{buff(b="vuln-down")}} in its place, reducing incoming damage by 50%
 To make up for it, Gaia's channeling will complete successfully,
 and near the end of the {{ice(t="Endless Ice Age")}} cast,
 Gaia will do her enormous hammer slam from {{gloss(k="E12N")}}
@@ -80,3 +83,10 @@ and remove a full half of the {{mob(n="Ice Veil")}}'s health bar.
 If you complete the phase in this way, then instead of shattering,
 the {{mob(n="Eternal Ice Fragment")}} will be absorbed into {{mob(n="Shiva")}}
 and you will be on the path to clearing the fight.
+
+[^1]: hehehe
+
+## Acknowledgments
+
+Special thanks for this section go to {{mob(n="Silent Bramble")}} and {{mob(n="Nova")}},
+with usual thanks to PoV uploaders.