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-      content="Hi! I’m Andi, and I work on projects related to math, physics, politics and more."
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           from randall munroe
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-          i study physics and data science at uc berkeley. i really like math.
+          i study physics and data science at uc berkeley. i really enjoy math.
           other sorta academic interests include languages and urbanism
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-          i also play clarinet, climb lots of rocks, run, and go places and take
-          bad photos
+          i also play clarinet (plus guitar once i get around to practicing),
+          climb rocks, shoot arrows, and go to random places
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       <b>ωhere else</b> to find me: