suggested changes to gentle intro (#8)

Co-authored-by: symbolpunk <[email protected]>

docs/gentle-introduction-dao.md

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 - Arbitrum Rollup is an optimistic rollup protocol that makes Ethereum transactions faster and cheaper while inheriting Ethereum's security guarantees [[1]](#footnote-1). Developers use Arbitrum to build user-friendly decentralized apps.
 - Governance of the Arbitrum Rollup protocol is now being decentralized through the distribution of the $ARB governance token.
 - $ARB tokens can be used to vote on Arbitrum DAO governance proposals, allowing $ARB holders to shape Arbitrum’s future together.
-- Token holders will be able to delegate voting power to trusted individuals. These individuals are called delegates.
+- Token holders will be able to delegate voting power to any individual they trust. These individuals are called delegates.
 - **To determine your airdrop eligibility**, connect your wallet to the Arbitrum One network on [gov.arbitrum.io](http://gov.arbitrum.io) and follow the prompts. Do this by (todo).
 - **To become an Arbitrum DAO delegate**, review the below material and then **submit your application** (todo).
-- **To build decentralized apps on Arbitrum,** check out our [developer docs](https://developer.arbitrum.io/intro/).
+- **To build decentralized apps on Arbitrum,** check out the [developer docs](https://developer.arbitrum.io/intro/).
 
 
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 :::caution An important reminder
 
-The only official website for the $ARB airdrop is TODO. There is no presale. We won’t ever ask for your seed phrase. If you’re ever unsure of anything related to Arbitrum, join our Discord and a member of our team will be happy to help.
+The only official website for the $ARB airdrop is TODO. There is no presale. We won’t ever ask for your seed phrase. If you’re ever unsure of anything related to Arbitrum, join our [Discord](#TODO_link) and a member of our team will be happy to help.
 
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@@ -30,9 +30,9 @@ The only official website for the $ARB airdrop is TODO. There is no presale. We
 
 Arbitrum Rollup is an optimistic rollup protocol that makes Ethereum transactions faster and cheaper. Developers use Arbitrum to build user-friendly decentralized apps.
 
-Our flagship chain, Arbitrum One, was [launched in 2021](https://offchain.medium.com/introducing-arbitrum-one-our-mainet-beta-ed0e9b63b435). This was quickly followed by the launch of [Arbitrum Nova](https://medium.com/offchainlabs/introducing-nova-arbitrum-anytrust-mainnet-is-open-for-developers-9a54692f345e), a separate [AnyTrust chain](https://medium.com/offchainlabs/introducing-anytrust-chains-cheaper-faster-l2-chains-with-minimal-trust-assumptions-31def59eb8d7) built for developers who need ultra low-cost transactions. In August 2022, Arbitrum One was [upgraded to the Arbitrum Nitro stack](https://medium.com/offchainlabs/arbitrum-nitro-one-small-step-for-l2-one-giant-leap-for-ethereum-bc9108047450), bringing a 7-10x upgrade to Arbitrum’s scaling capabilities.
+Our flagship chain, Arbitrum One, was [launched in 2021](https://offchain.medium.com/introducing-arbitrum-one-our-mainet-beta-ed0e9b63b435). This was quickly followed by the launch of [Arbitrum Nova](https://medium.com/offchainlabs/introducing-nova-arbitrum-anytrust-mainnet-is-open-for-developers-9a54692f345e), a separate [AnyTrust chain](https://medium.com/offchainlabs/introducing-anytrust-chains-cheaper-faster-l2-chains-with-minimal-trust-assumptions-31def59eb8d7) built for ultra low-cost transactions. In August 2022, Arbitrum One was [upgraded to the Arbitrum Nitro stack](https://medium.com/offchainlabs/arbitrum-nitro-one-small-step-for-l2-one-giant-leap-for-ethereum-bc9108047450), bringing a 7-10x upgrade to Arbitrum’s scaling capabilities.
 
-Governance of the Arbitrum Rollup protocol is now being decentralized through the distribution of $ARB governance tokens.
+Governance of Arbitrum One and Arbitrum Nova is now being decentralized through the distribution of $ARB governance tokens.
 
 
 ### What's governance?
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ If you’ve used Arbitrum at any time before the the snapshot date (August 31st,
 
 Governance of the Arbitrum Rollup protocol is driven by two governing bodies: the **Security Council** and the **Arbitrum DAO**.
 
-- The **Security Council** is a 12-member council of publicly known entities elected by members of the Arbitrum DAO. This council is responsible for maintaining Arbitrum’s security and performance through the selective application of **emergency upgrades**.
+- The **Security Council** is a 12-member council of publicly known entities elected by members of the Arbitrum DAO. This council is responsible for ensuring Arbitrum’s security and performance through the selective application of **emergency upgrades** when/if necessary.
 - The **Arbitrum DAO** is the worldwide community of $ARB token holders and the delegates that they select. The DAO is responsible for governing Arbitrum and its Security Council. The DAO can use constitutional proposals to modify the Security Council’s powers, or even to eliminate the Security Council entirely. The Security Council’s powers are delegated to the Security Council by the DAO, and are to be exercised in the best interests of the DAO.
 
 
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ Yep! As long as they either hold $ARB or are a delegate.
 
 ### What’s a delegate again?
 
-A delegate is like an elected representative. $ARB token holders can delegate their voting power to delegates.
+A delegate is like an elected representative. $ARB token holders can delegate their voting power to anyone they choose.
 
 
 ### Why would I want to become a delegate?
@@ -129,7 +129,6 @@ TODO
 
 
 ### How is consensus reached on DAO proposals?
-
 TODO