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Closes #355. Improve a bit of formatting.
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daobrien committed Feb 13, 2023
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<term role="true">agile</term>
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The AMD64 logo is trademarked; the term "AMD64" is not. For more information about AMD trademarks, see the <citetitle>AMD Trademark Information</citetitle> page at <ulink url="https://www.amd.com/en/corporate/trademarks" />.
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For more information about Intel&reg; trademarks, see <ulink url="http://www.intel.com/content/www/us/en/legal/trademarks.html" /> and <ulink url="http://www.intel.com/content/www/us/en/trademarks/trademarks.html" />.
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<term>application</term>
<varlistentry id="application-velocity">
<term>application velocity</term>
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<para>
When used as a proper name, use the capitalization of the product, such as GNUPro, Source-Navigator, and Red&nbsp;Hat Enterprise&nbsp;Linux.
When used as a command, use lowercase as appropriate, such as "To start GCC, type gcc".
Used on its own, this phrase does not indicate what aspect of the application lifecycle is faster, because velocity means "speed in a given direction.”
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Always provide context on first mention for what exactly is moving faster (for example, application development velocity, development velocity, development and deployment velocity).
Then, unless the meaning changes, you can use “application velocity” for subsequent uses.
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<para>
For example, the OpenShift team has used this term to mean "creating a streamlined developer experience" whose context is key to setting audience expectations for their content.
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<note>
<para>
"vi" is always lowercase.
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<term role="true">Applixware</term>
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