I had to redo my skit proofread changes.

Astro's revisions only made their way into my build after I merged in to post my revisions. (even though I fetched origin and merged into master before I began proofreading.)
lifebottle · Jan 17, 2022 · 3e420cd · 3e420cd
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diff --git a/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15605_0000.txt b/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15605_0000.txt
@@ -13,8 +13,7 @@ to evaporate the water, you would have.
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 You can do that? That's amazing!
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-We should use that
-to grill some fish!
+We should use that to grill some fish!
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 I will not use my powers on
 something so menial.<x00>

diff --git a/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15609_0000.txt b/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15609_0000.txt
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ an entity as intimidating as the Draconis.
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 Maybe a beastmaster was controlling them...
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-It's possible that they were being manipulated.
+It's likely that they were being manipulated.
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 I have never heard of anyone who
 was capable of such things. <x00>

diff --git a/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15616_0000.txt b/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15616_0000.txt
@@ -17,6 +17,6 @@ a state similar in appearance to sleep.
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 Huh? So you do sleep.
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-We do not.
-We simply suspend uneccesary functions.<x00>
+We do not. We simply suspend
+uneccesary functions.<x00>
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diff --git a/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15622_0000.txt b/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15622_0000.txt
@@ -5,8 +5,7 @@
 get_chat_time=><x17><x15><xC5><x24><x02><x89><x80>
 
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-The city of Janos is just
-beyond the forest.
+The city of Janos is just beyond the forest.
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 Got it.<x00>
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diff --git a/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15623_0000.txt b/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15623_0000.txt
@@ -5,6 +5,5 @@
 get_chat_time=><x17><x15><xC5><x24><x02><x89><x80>
 
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-The city of Janos is just
-beyond the forest.<x00>
+The city of Janos is just beyond the forest.<x00>
 [ENDBLOCK]
diff --git a/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15626_0000.txt b/patch/PAK1_UTF8/15626_0000.txt
@@ -8,8 +8,8 @@ get_chat_time=><x17><x15><xC5><x24><x02><x89><x80>
 I was kinda worried for a bit, but looks
 like we'll reach Seinegald no problem!
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-Don't let your guard down.
-You never know what could happen.
+Don't let your guard down. You
+never know what could happen.
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 You worry too much, <Dymlos>!
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