Chris little PC1.8 Editorial

23-049/23-049.adoc

@@ -4,10 +4,10 @@
 :status: swg-draft
 :committee: technical
 :edition: 1.0
-:docnumber: 23-049
+:docnumber: 23-049r1
 :received-date: 2023-05-23
-:issued-date: 2023-05-23
-:published-date: 2023-12-13
+:issued-date: 2024-02-08
+:published-date: 2024-02-08
 :external-id: http://www.opengis.net/doc/AS/temporal-conceptual-model/1.0
 :referenceURLID: http://docs.opengeospatial.org/as/23-049/23-049.html
 :fullname: Chris Little
@@ -36,13 +36,12 @@ include::sections/04-terms_and_definitions.adoc[]
 
 include::sections/05-conventions.adoc[]
 
-// Add clause files as needed
 include::sections/06-cm-characteristics.adoc[]
 
-include::sections/07-cm.adoc[]
-
 include::sections/08-temporal-regimes.adoc[]
 
+include::sections/07-cm.adoc[]
+
 include::sections/09-attributes.adoc[]
 
 include::sections/10-notation.adoc[]

23-049/sections/03-references.adoc

@@ -2,7 +2,8 @@
 [bibliography]
 == References
 
-* [[[rfc3339,IETF RFC 3339]]]
+* [[[rfc3339,IETF RFC 3339]]] IETF: _IETF RFC 3339, Date and Time on the Internet: Timestamps_. Internet Engineering Task Force (2002).
+https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc3339[https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc3339].
 
 * [[[iso8601,ISO 8601]]] ISO: _ISO 8601, Information interchange Representation of dates and times_. International Organization for Standardization, Geneva. https://www.iso.org/standard/40874.html[https://www.iso.org/standard/40874.html].
 
@@ -13,6 +14,7 @@
 * [[[temporal-knowledge,Maintaining Knowledge about Temporal Intervals]]]
 Allen, J. F.: _Maintaining Knowledge about Temporal Intervals_. Communications of the ACM, vol. 26, pp832-843 (1983).
 
-* [[[ogc18005,OGC 18-005r4]]]
+* [[[ogc18005,OGC 18-005r8]]] OGC: _OGC Abstract Specification Topic 2: Referencing by coordinates (Including Corrigendum 1 and Corrigendum 2)_. Open Geospatial Consortium (2003). 
+https://docs.ogc.org/as/18-005r8/18-005r8.pdf[https://docs.ogc.org/as/18-005r8/18-005r8.pdf].
 
-* [[[w3cowltime,W3C TR owl-time]]] Cox, S., Little, C.: _W3C Time Ontology in OWL_. World Wide Web Consortium (2022) https://www.w3.org/TR/owl-time/[https://www.w3.org/TR/owl-time/]
+* [[[w3cowltime,W3C Time Ontology in OWL]]] Cox, S., Little, C.: _W3C Time Ontology in OWL_. World Wide Web Consortium (2022) https://www.w3.org/TR/owl-time/[https://www.w3.org/TR/owl-time/].

23-049/sections/04-terms_and_definitions.adoc

@@ -3,6 +3,10 @@
 
 === Terms and definitions
 
+==== clock
+
+regularly repeating physical phenomenon that can be counted
+
 ==== conceptual model
 
 description of common concepts and their relationships, particularly in order to facilitate exchange of information between parties within a specific domain
@@ -93,6 +97,9 @@ one-dimensional {{coordinate system}} where the axis is time
 
 NOTE: The object is normally time on the Earth.
 
+==== tick
+
+event which is a single occurrence of the regularly repeating physical phenomenon of a clock
 
 === Abbreviations
 

23-049/sections/06-cm-characteristics.adoc

@@ -13,6 +13,6 @@ A conceptual model:
 
 . organizes the vocabulary needed to communicate consistently and thoroughly about the know-how of a problem domain;
 
-. starts with a glossary of terms and definitions. There is a very high premium on high-quality, design-independent definitions, free of data or implementation biases; the model also emphasizes rich vocabulary; and
+. contains the definitions of the concepts that it organizes. There is a high premium on high-quality, design-independent definitions, free of data or implementation biases; the model also emphasizes rich vocabulary; and
 
 . is always about identifying the correct choice of terms to use in communications, including statements of rules and requirements, especially where high precision and subtle distinctions need to be made. The core concepts of a temporal geospatial problem domain are typically quite stable over time.

23-049/sections/07-cm.adoc

@@ -9,8 +9,10 @@ The model is also informed by the <<w3cowltime,W3C Time Ontology in OWL>>.
 ....
 @startuml
 abstract class ReferenceSystem {
-  dimension = 1..*
-  applicableLocationTimeOrDomain
+        dimension "dimension >= 1"
+        locationOfApplicability = 0..1
+        timeOfApplicability = 0..1
+        domainOfApplicability = 0..1
 }
 
 note right of ReferenceSystem
@@ -20,13 +22,10 @@ Note: Has at least one of:
 end note
 
 abstract class SpatialReferenceSystem {
-  dimension = 1..*
-  applicableLocationTimeOrDomain
 }
 
 abstract class TemporalReferenceSystem {
   dimension = 1
-  applicableLocationTimeOrDomain
 }
 
 note left of TemporalReferenceSystem
@@ -40,59 +39,52 @@ ReferenceSystem <|-- SpatialReferenceSystem : is a
 ReferenceSystem <|-- TemporalReferenceSystem : is a
 
 class OrdinalTemporalReferenceSystem {
-  dimension = 1
-  applicableLocationTimeOrDomain
 }
-
 class TemporalCoordinateReferenceSystem {
-  dimension = 1
-  applicableLocationTimeOrDomain
 }
-
 class Calendar {
-  dimension = 1
-  applicableLocationTimeOrDomain
 }
-
+class Timeline {
+}
 TemporalReferenceSystem <|-- OrdinalTemporalReferenceSystem : is a
 TemporalReferenceSystem <|-- TemporalCoordinateReferenceSystem : is a
 TemporalReferenceSystem <|-- Calendar : is a
 
 OrdinalTemporalReferenceSystem "1" o-- "(ordered)" Events : consists of
-OrdinalTemporalReferenceSystem "1" o-- "0..1" Epoch : has an
-OrdinalTemporalReferenceSystem "1" --> "1..*" Notation : can use
-TemporalCoordinateReferenceSystem "1" o-- "1" Epoch : has an
-TemporalCoordinateReferenceSystem "1" --> "1..*" Notation : can use
-TemporalCoordinateReferenceSystem "1" o-- "1" Timescale : has a
-
-Calendar "1" o-- "0..1" Epoch : has an
-Calendar "1" --> "1..*" Notation : can use
-Calendar "1" o-- "2..*" Timescale : has a
+OrdinalTemporalReferenceSystem "1" o-- "0..1" Epoch : anchored by
+OrdinalTemporalReferenceSystem "1" --> "1..*" Notation : is represented by
+TemporalCoordinateReferenceSystem "1" o-- "1" Epoch : anchored by
+TemporalCoordinateReferenceSystem "1" --> "1..*" Notation : is represented by
+TemporalCoordinateReferenceSystem "1" o-- "1" Timescale : must have
+
+Calendar "1" o-- "0..1" Epoch : anchored by
+Calendar "1" --> "1..*" Notation : is represented by
 Calendar "1" o-- "1" Timeline : has a
-Calendar "1" o-- "1..*" Algorithm : has a
+Calendar "1" o-- "1..*" Algorithm : defined by
 
 class Timescale {
   StartCount
   EndCount
   arithmetic
 }
 
-Timescale "1" o-- "1" Clock : has a
+Timescale "1" o-- "1" Clock : determined by
 Timescale "1" o-- "1" UnitOfMeasure : has a
 
 class Clock {
-  Tick definition
 }
+Clock "1" o-- "1..*" Ticks : counts
+class Ticks {
+    }
 
 class UnitOfMeasure {
   Direction
 }
 
-class Timeline {
-}
+class Algorithm {
+} 
+Algorithm "1" o-- "2..*" Timescale : uses
 
-Timeline "1" o-- "2..*" Timescale : has a
-Timeline "1" o-- "1..*" Algorithm : has a
 @enduml
 
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