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diff --git a/en/deploy-tiproxy.md b/en/deploy-tiproxy.md
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ If you need to deploy TiProxy for an existing TiDB cluster, follow these steps:
 
 4. Configure the related parameters in `spec.tidb` of the TidbCluster CR. For example:
 
-    + It is recommended to configure `graceful-wait-before-shutdown` to a value longer than the maximum duration of the transactions in your application. This is used together with TiProxy's connection migration feature. For more information, see [TiProxy Limitations](https://docs.pingcap.com/tidb/v7.6/tiproxy-overview#limitations).
+    + It is recommended to configure `graceful-wait-before-shutdown` to a value greater than the maximum duration of the transactions in your application. This is used together with TiProxy's connection migration feature. For more information, see [TiProxy Limitations](https://docs.pingcap.com/tidb/v7.6/tiproxy-overview#limitations).
 
         ```yaml
           spec:
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ If you need to deploy TiProxy for an existing TiDB cluster, follow these steps:
               session-token-signing-key = "/var/session/tls.key"
         ```
 
-        For more information, refer to TiDB configuration file [`session-token-signing-cert`](https://docs.pingcap.com/tidb/stable/tidb-configuration-file#session-token-signing-cert-new-in-v640).
+        For more information, see [`session-token-signing-cert`](https://docs.pingcap.com/tidb/stable/tidb-configuration-file#session-token-signing-cert-new-in-v640).
 
 After TiProxy is started, you can find the corresponding `tiproxy-sql` load balancer service by running the following command.
 

diff --git a/zh/deploy-tiproxy.md b/zh/deploy-tiproxy.md
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ summary: 了解如何在 Kubernetes 上为已有 TiDB 集群部署负载均衡 T
 
 4. 配置 TidbCluster CR 中 `spec.tidb` 的相关参数：
 
-    + 推荐设置 TiDB 的 `graceful-wait-before-shutdown` 大于应用程序最长的事务的持续时间，配合 TiProxy 的连接迁移，详见 [TiProxy 使用限制](https://docs.pingcap.com/zh/tidb/v7.6/tiproxy-overview#使用限制)。
+    + 推荐设置 TiDB `graceful-wait-before-shutdown` 的值大于应用程序中事务的最长的持续时间，配合 TiProxy 的连接迁移。详见 [TiProxy 使用限制](https://docs.pingcap.com/zh/tidb/v7.6/tiproxy-overview#使用限制)。
 
        ```yaml
        spec:
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ summary: 了解如何在 Kubernetes 上为已有 TiDB 集群部署负载均衡 T
               session-token-signing-key = "/var/session/tls.key"
         ```
 
-       详见 TiDB 配置文档 [`session-token-signing-key`](https://docs.pingcap.com/zh/tidb/v7.6/tidb-configuration-file#session-token-signing-cert-从-v640-版本开始引入)。
+       详见 [`session-token-signing-key`](https://docs.pingcap.com/zh/tidb/v7.6/tidb-configuration-file#session-token-signing-cert-从-v640-版本开始引入)。
 
 TiProxy 启动后，可通过以下命令找到对应的 `tiproxy-sql` 负载均衡服务。