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22 changes: 11 additions & 11 deletions docs/installation/community-operator.md
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Expand Up @@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ in the [Kepler-Operator repo](https://github.com/sustainable-computing-io/kepler
operatorcondition.operators.coreos.com/kepler-operator.v0.8.1 12h
....
━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━
🔔 To delete all resources listed above, rerun with --delete option added.
🔔 To delete all resources listed above, rerun with the `--delete` option added.

 ./hack/uninstall-operator.sh --delete
```
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![Operator installation in OCP](../fig/ocp_installation/operator_installation_ocp_1_0.8.z.png)

- Choose `alpha` channel for deploying the `latest` version of the Operator.
- Choose `alpha` channel to deploy the `latest` version of the Operator.

> **From OCP 4.15 onwards operator can be installed on Namespace other than `openshift-operators`**
> **From OCP 4.15 onwards operator can be installed on Namespaces other than `openshift-operators`**

- Click on `Install`

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- Configure user workload monitoring on the cluster. Refer to the official OpenShift [documentation](https://docs.openshift.com/container-platform/latest/monitoring/enabling-monitoring-for-user-defined-projects.html) for more information.
- Navigate to Observe ❯ Dashboard
- To view overall power consumption select `Power Monitoring / Overview` from dropdown.
- To view overall power consumption select `Power Monitoring / Overview` from the dropdown.
![Operator installation](../fig/ocp_installation/operator_installation_ocp_7_0.8.z.png)
- To view the power consumption by namespace select `Power Monitoring / Namespace` from dropdown.
- To view the power consumption by namespace select `Power Monitoring / Namespace` from the dropdown.
![Operator installation](../fig/ocp_installation/operator_installation_ocp_8_0.8.z.png)

### Deploy the Grafana Dashboard
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### Will Kepler work on earlier releases of OpenShift?

Our recommendation is use `OCP 4.13` and above, but Kepler can be installed on `OCP 4.11`
and `4.12`. In future the Operator may be updated to check the version of
and `4.12`. In the future the Operator may be updated to check the version of
Kubernetes that is installed e.g. `v1.25`.

### How do I set nodeSelector and tolerations for Kepler?
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```

!!! note
Once instance is created user need to manually create redfish secret `redfish-secret` in the namespace `kepler-operator`.
Once secret is created operator will reconcile and Kepler will be able to connect to Redfish.
Once an instance is created, the user must manually create redfish secret `redfish-secret` in the namespace `kepler-operator`.
Once the secret is created, the operator will reconcile and Kepler will be able to connect to Redfish.

For more info regarding specifying content of secret refer to [upstream manifest](https://raw.githubusercontent.com/sustainable-computing-io/kepler/main/manifests/config/exporter/redfish.csv).
For more information regarding secret content specification refer to the [upstream manifest](https://raw.githubusercontent.com/sustainable-computing-io/kepler/main/manifests/config/exporter/redfish.csv).

### Where is Kepler exporter pods deployed?
### Where are Kepler exporter pods deployed?

Once Kepler Instance is created all the related resources like pods, daemonsets, configmaps, secret's etc. are present inside `kepler-operator` namespace.
Once a Kepler Instance is created all related resources like pods, daemonsets, configmaps, secrets etc. are present inside the `kepler-operator` namespace.
To view the available resources:

```sh
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