further examples of phraseology and cleanup of existing tips

docs/terminal/eastsale.md

@@ -89,10 +89,18 @@ Aircraft using the Princes Route should expect a clearance not above 1,500FT. Ot
 
 #### Longford Lane (UOFL)
 
-The Longford Lane is active at all times when R360A is active. It is an airspace reservation within R360A to allow ESSO helicopters to operate between Longford Heliport and offshore oil platforms.
+The Longford Lane is active at all times when R360A is active. It is an airspace reservation within R360A to allow ESSO helicopters to operate between Longford Heliport and offshore oil platforms and other aircraft to transit to the north east.
 The Longford Lane extends from the `SFC` to `A020`.
 Upon pilot request, clear aircraft to transit through the Longford Lane.
 
+!!! example
+   *RCR is a VFR Archer 10 miles to the north west of McGauran beach*  
+   **RCR** -> **ES TCU**: "East Sale Approach, RCR, Archer, 10 miles north west McGauran beach, 3500, request clearance Loch Sport"  
+   **ES TCU** -> **RCR**: "RCR, East Sale Approach, squawk 1234, remain outside charlie airspace"  
+   **RCR** -> **ES TCU**: "Remain OCTA, squawk 1234, RCR"  
+   **ES TCU** -> **RCR**: "RCR, identified, cleared McGauran Beach, Loch Sport, not above 1500"  
+   **RCR** -> **ES TCU**: "cleared McGauran Beach, Lock Sport, not above 1500, RCR"  
+
 
 ## Lanes and Training Areas
 
@@ -197,20 +205,20 @@ When expect instrument approach is advertised on the ATIS:
 
 Auto release is not utilized at East Sale. 'Next' coordination is required from ES ADC to ES TCU for all aircraft.
 
-> **Example:**
-> **ES ADC** -> **ES TCU**: "Next, ASY01, runway 09"  
-> **ES TCU** -> **ES ADC**: "ASY01, Assigned Heading Left 030, unrestricted"  
-> **ES ADC** -> **ES TCU**: "Left Heading 030, ASY01"
+!!! Example
+   <span class="hotline">ES ADC</span> -> <span class="hotline">ES TCU</span>: "Next, ASY01, runway 09"
+   <span class="hotline">ES TCU</span> -> <span class="hotline">ES ADC</span>: "ASY01, Assigned Heading Left 030, unrestricted"
+   <span class="hotline">ES ADC</span> -> <span class="hotline">ES TCU</span>: "Left Heading 030, ASY01"
 
 ### Helicopter Operations Coordination
 
 Helicopters departing from helicopter spots will be treated as if departing from the duty runway.
 
-> **Example:**
-> *PSDN14 is a VFR helicopter departing from the threshold of RWY04 (in the direction of runway 27)*  
-> **ES ADC** -> **ES TCU**: "Next, PSDN14, runway 27"  
-> **ES TCU** -> **ES ADC**: "PSDN14, right turn, unrestricted"  
-> **ES ADC** -> **ES TCU**: "Right turn, PSDN14"
+!!! Example
+    *PSDN14 is a VFR helicopter departing from the threshold of RWY04 (in the direction of runway 27)*  
+    <span class="hotline">ES ADC</span> -> <span class="hotline">ES TCU</span>: "Next, ASY01, runway 09"
+    <span class="hotline">ES TCU</span> -> <span class="hotline">ES ADC</span>: "ASY01, Assigned Heading Left 030, unrestricted"
+    <span class="hotline">ES ADC</span> -> <span class="hotline">ES TCU</span>: "Left Heading 030, ASY01"
 
 ### Transfer to Tower